STORYBOARD AFTER AUDIENCE FEEDBACK




STORYBOARD/SCRIPT BEFORE AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
What Image?
Camera Shot?
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What Is Happening?
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Sound
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Establishing shot of Church
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Location of Rio’s funeral.
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Non Diegetic Music
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Mid-shot
Long-shot
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Amira, Lauran and Kiran
sitting in church at Rios funeral.
Everyone around Rio’s
Gravestone
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Non Diegetic Music continued
Characters will be upset and
crying.
Priest speaking “We are
gathered here today, for the funeral of Rio Smith” and goes on to start religious scripture
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Long-shot
Close-up
Over-Shoulder shot
Close Up
Close Up
Close Up
Mid-Shot
Extreme Close Up
Mid Shot
Close Up
Medium Shot
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Lauran looking at
gravestone once everyone has left.
Gravestone
Lauran looking at Gravestone
and is then touched by an old women
Lauran looks confusingly in to camera as though it is the
old women
Women looks very agitated
and scared while speaking
Lauran looks confused
Women hands a piece of paper
to Lauran
Address of paper
Lauran carries on speaking
about the event
Kiran asks for the address
Lauran replies with the
address
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Non-diegetic music continued
in background
Music goes up as women
touches Lauran
-No Dialogue
“Rio was murdered, It was
not an accident”
“What are you on about?
“You will get your answers
here, this is all I can do”
“She just gave me this
address and said that’s all she can give”
“We have to go there and
see, Where is it?’
“*ADDRESS NAME*”
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Establishing shot
Long shot
DISSOLVE
Extreme Long shot
Midshot
Over the shoulder shot
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Train Station is shown
driving past.
Lauran, Amira and Kiran are
out on an empty road. Kiran speaks to the girls.
Girls walking in an empty
space, Amira speaks.
Lauran replies.
Shot shows Kiran from the
back looking at the house from a distance
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Diegetic sound of train
‘Guys, I don’t think there
is any taxis here, We’ll have to walk , it cant be that long”
“We’ve been walking for ages
now, do any of you remember the way back?”
“I don’t think we do”
“We’re here. There’s the
house’
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Establishing Shot
Long shot
Long shot inside with close ups
Birds Eye view
Long shot
Close up
Over shoulder/Long shot
High angle shot
DISSOLVE
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The house is now shown in a
different angle.
Girls open the door and walk
in.
Shots of inside the house
Lauran walks up the stairs
alone
Camera shows her walking in
to room towards drawer
She sees an image of her and
her three friends with Rios face crossed out and then next on the picture is
Amira then Kiran and then Lauran.
Lauran walks out backwards
facing towards the drawer
Lauran is dragged from the
legs and is on the floor getting dragged, Only leather gloves of the villain
are shown
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“This house is huge”
“ This place is weird”
Non diegetic sound of
Laurans heartbeat slowly going very fast
And then silence
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She screams and shouts “ We
have to get out of here!”
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Long shot
Close Up
Close Up
Long shot
Close up
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Lauran, Amira and Kiran all
look scared and are in a dark room alone
Lauran is shown speaking.
Kiran speaks
The girls are shown in the
room
An axe is then hit near
Kiran and all three girls scream
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“We’re next, its going to
kill us too”
“It’ll have to kill me to
get you two and I wont let that happen”
Silence
The girls scream
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Behind shoulder Shot
Close Up
Long shot
&
Mid shot
Mid shot
Close Up
Front shot
Midshot
Midshot
Close up
Camera on Floor
long shot
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Lauran is shown running
through a grave yard and then drops
Amira running through the
inside of church through middle and then as she reaches end she sees the man
Kiran trying to open a
locked door in desperation
Amira sits on step after
running to catch her breath and then we see a foot behind her
-Lauran, Amira and Kiran all
trying to hide behind a tree
-Amira and Kiran are both
tied up in a dark cellar.
Villain holding Amiras mouth
All 3 girls hiding on floor
looking towards the left. Girl on the right is dragged.
Glass falls on the floor
One of the friends is tied
to a pole in the house and two other friends are trying help her.
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Screaming for help
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Close-up with high angle
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Last shot shows Lauran lying
on the floor looking in to the camera, crying as though she has given up .
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“Please just let me go”
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